mimpi jadi putri 


Hak cipta karya foto ada pada fotografer dan dilindungi oleh undang-undang.

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Irwan Akhir P (1942)

Mencoba olah digital dengan picassa 2, lumayan juga hasilnya. Mohon kritikan dan masukkannya.
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nDate Time Original: 2005:11:05 14:12:59
nISO Speed Ratings: 100

  • Nilai foto: 7
  • Dilihat: 177
  • Waktu upload: Minggu, 06 Nov 2005
  • Lokasi: Katumiri, cimahi, Jawa Barat, Indonesia
Shooting Data
  • Aperture: f/3.2
  • Speed: 1/60
  • ISO: 0
  • Kamera: Olympus C-740 *
  • Lensa: Olympus *
  • * Masih menggunakan daftar alat lama yang mungkin tidak akurat.
Kritik dan Komentar
 Rahul Sharma (7058)

18 tahun yang lalu

Welcom to this forum Irwan. I would suggest NOT to use any digital tools, a photograoh must have a strong base of 1. composition 2. ligthing/exposure 3.concept. And you must try to get these things right before you can try any digital manupulations. This picture is heavily overexposed. The object is the kuda and the kid, the high camera angle is not helping also. The compostion is 'square', which is not adding anything to the concept. Your concept is 'mimpi', and you have tried to blur the corners to make it look like a dream. But i think you have to try harder..;-) I'm sure we will see more pictures from you here... keep shooting...

 AA Wahyu Prayasa (31543)

18 tahun yang lalu

nice capture.. tapi masih OE kak dibeberapa bagian.. salam